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A belated present for oki_chan

  • Aug. 22nd, 2008 at 5:51 AM
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Title: Silence
Author: Lithium Delusions
Rating: R
Word count: 205
Notes: This is a belated birthday present for [info]oki_chan on the prompt she gave me... Silence.  It's very dark.  Happy belated birthday.  All characters belong to CLAMP, I'm just poaching.  Unbetaed.

Silence

 

Silence isn’t golden, it’s a roaring thunder that drowns out everything else.   It’s your own voice screaming words you cannot hear, your heart beating so loud in your ears that there is nothing else in the world.  Silence isn’t a sound, or even a lack of sounds, it’s a madness that sweeps through your blood and rips holes in your mind, shatters your sanity, and tears your heart to shreds.

 Silence is watching life fade from a golden eye, and being helpless to call it back.  Silence is watching tears fill Sakura’s eyes as she struggles to stop the flow of blood from a wound that will not close.  Silence is watching a boy-not-yet-a-man fight in your place because you are too numb.

 It’s a world of insanity, where a thousand voices screaming cannot be heard over the sound of your own cries.  It’s a hell and you are pitifully glad when the time-space-witch’s magic wraps you up and carries you away from a world named Silence that has taken the only thing you ever loved with all your heart and left an aching void in its place.

 And then there is only silence… and a battered, bloody body in your arms.

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[info]misumisu84 wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 11:32 am (UTC)
It is dark, but rather good! I like the descriptions!
[info]lithiumdelusion wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 10:08 pm (UTC)
Thank you. I was in a dark mood when i wrote it.
[info]compassrose7577 wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 01:58 pm (UTC)
I just wanted to say welcome back, and couldn't get back to say it! It's been a long, dry spell! The community is a better place for it.
[info]lithiumdelusion wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 10:12 pm (UTC)
Hello, luv. It's been a while, hasn't it? I'll be searching for my flash-drives (hopefully here with me and not still in storage) so I can post a new chapter of Dark Lady... I need to go back and re-read yours... I've been away so long, I forgot where I left off!

How have you been?
[info]meowzy_chan wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 03:16 pm (UTC)
Fff, I haven't been keeping up with the manga. Does something like this actually happen, or was it thought of especially for the prompt?

(it's a lovely story, by the way, no matter how short)
[info]lithiumdelusion wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 10:23 pm (UTC)
It's not something that actually happened, but with the way things have gone lately, it could. Oki-chan gave me the prompt and this is what came out of it.

Glad you liked it.
[info]ellethill wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 03:22 pm (UTC)
Oh, oh my, you just broke me... yay!
[info]lithiumdelusion wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 10:24 pm (UTC)
*offers superglue* Didn't mean to break you.
[info]andra_sashner wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 04:13 pm (UTC)
Dark it is indeed, but very well written and emotionally stirring. The implications and descriptions are good. Thanks for sharing!

Also, can you explain (just a little?) what the "Now we match" means in your icon? Is that from a recent TRC chapter? Thanks.
[info]nimoe wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 06:09 pm (UTC)
I know what it means. Are you reading the English releases, because I think that might be a spoiler for you if you are.
[info]andra_sashner wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 06:49 pm (UTC)
And there in is the crux of the problem... I actually haven't read not even one panel of any Tsubasa Chronicle manga. I just watched the anime and even that was kinda ages ago.

I guess this is where you tell me I'm missing out and should go to manga hut or what not and go read?
[info]nimoe wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 07:24 pm (UTC)
I mean, I could just tell you straight out, if you want. I'm not much for pushing my opinions on others.

But, yes, I would suggest you read. It's not like it's a chore. It IS a CLAMP series; so it's more like me asking you to enjoy yourself with depth.
[info]andra_sashner wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 08:07 pm (UTC)
You're probably right. I'll get to reading it and save the joyous discoveries of its twists and turns there; I retract my question.

I wouldn't be able to truly appreciate it unless I had the background story, I suppose.

Thanks.
[info]lithiumdelusion wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 10:49 pm (UTC)
I'm very happy you like this! The whole story behind the icon comes from more recent chapters of Tsubasa. the best thing it to go to onemanga.com and read the whole story. Long story short, Fai lost an eye and Kuro an arm... The icon was made especially for me by [info]iambickilometer in reference to a story I wrote way back when I first read chapter 167 that you can find here. Does that help you?
[info]hopelikefever wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 05:12 pm (UTC)
That was very beautiful! :DD Thanks so much for writing it for me! ♥
[info]lithiumdelusion wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 10:56 pm (UTC)
I'm happy you liked it. The prompt wouldn't let me write anything else! Happy birthday a little late!
[info]nimoe wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 06:08 pm (UTC)
I read it aloud the first time, just for kicks. It made my heart lurch in my chest.

*le sob*
[info]lithiumdelusion wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 10:55 pm (UTC)
Thank you. It was rather angst-heavy, wasn't it?

By the way, the icon was made for me from a story I wrote a while ago called "Prices Paid." The quote was from there. I also passed it on to [info]andra_sashner...and told her to read the manga too!

Edited at 2008-08-22 10:59 pm (UTC)
[info]cellophaneroses wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 10:16 pm (UTC)
...okay so I'm officially having a bit of trouble breathing from the angst. D8 As in I think my lungs/heart stopped working for a few moments or something. ;-; So beautifully written and angsty. ;-;

(...this is a good thing, by the way xD; )
[info]lithiumdelusion wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 11:11 pm (UTC)
Thank you...I think. I don't think I've ever made anyone stop breathing/have a heart attack from my writing before.

I'm happy you enjoyed the angst!
[info]cellophaneroses wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 11:56 pm (UTC)
Eheh okay I may have exaggerated but point is it hit home. So yeah. ^^;
[info]chess_77 wrote:
Aug. 23rd, 2008 02:20 am (UTC)
I absolutely love it... but now I am depressed :( I should probably sleep, it's 3.20 in the morning ¬_¬
[info]lithiumdelusion wrote:
Aug. 23rd, 2008 03:09 am (UTC)
~pats~ Don't be depressed. Sounds like you could use some sleep.

Thank you for enjoying the story!
[info]moonprincess792 wrote:
Aug. 23rd, 2008 10:22 pm (UTC)
i've been reading lots of fanfics for a whilee-
but its my first time commenting on lj so.. yeah..
such powerful writing i really loved it!!
[info]lithiumdelusion wrote:
Aug. 24th, 2008 11:04 am (UTC)
Thank you very much! I'm honored to have been your first comment on LJ.
[info]shyrofoxfeather wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2008 07:14 pm (UTC)
Quite illustrative! Very chilling details and depictions.

Poor Kuro-wan...
[info]lithiumdelusion wrote:
Sep. 8th, 2008 08:31 am (UTC)
Oh, thank you! I'm pleased that you enjoyed.

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